--[Flow]---
Got the impression that it is written to a slow type paced beat, the flow was nice..some dope internals...

"We live in a bent world with warped philosophies
But this aint a lent rhyme about social atrocities
Cos I aint Socrates" - reminds me alot of my own style..lol...so dope for that

--[Vocab]--
Vocab was nice, you used it well, used it constructivly n' effieciently, wasn;t overused and at the same type it wasn't lacking anywhere, some brutal wordplay too:

"Cos Im double six on the dice, half the high, rolling twins"

--[Concept]--
Had some good relative stuff here, you made it personal to yourself which i liked, got a sense of enclosedness [spelling?] in this piece...maybe i'm way off but meh...lol

--[Overall]--
will look forward to Part 2 mos def...you are constantly elevatin', you have a hella alot of potential...4/5 - deserved!