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Old 01-31-04, 07:59 AM   #26
ScorpionDeathLoc
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Quit-hidding...Your who crew is accussed of dick-riding+
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109746
Better quit-writing...Ur 'seen as pussy' like clit-spying+
descent opener wit cool punch
'Jerkin dicks in prison' is da only way a 'beatin-a-guy'+
U'll probably back out this battle...Retreating-is-wise+
first line sucked...Second line is cool
Ur conceeded-with-lies, think U can handle someone-of-my-stature?+
I'll continue to pierce your chest until lungs-are-raptured+
Want me to Ghost write for ya? U'll probably post-the-verse-backwards+
Im Killin ya crews foundation, like a leg that's completely factured+
solid lines....Good work on these
Dynasty soldiers suck 'erect dicks' to make them 'stand at attention'+
Merke Me? Ur plan is suspended, Ur wak never to have a hand in decisions+
okay finish...Could have been better
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I know ya been anxious for this slaughter to commence,
but id put five on ya verse and it still wouldn't make sense,
First line is nice.... But the second line is played...Great opener
look at ya crew dog, ill B2K and merk ya whole entire squad,
sweep the streetz and put you prostitutes out of a fuckin job,
count ya teeth now so you can find em all when im through,
cause im takin ya whole grill out like niggas at barbeque's,
nice 2 verse... not really a hard hittin punch
i could let you key infinite lines and blaze ya wit one,
cause ya chances of winnin' are less than second to none,
good verse
now the streetz ain't sayin to much of shit no more,
cause dicks in they mouth's stoppin em from settlin the score,
Ill spit my shit on ya face so ya can see my words clearly,
and have you cower down, provin now that ya fear me.
solid closing lines
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Punches - I think Antonio Banderas had the better punches in this battle
Worplay - The WORDPLAY is tied....(I think it is tied because both verses came hard with wordplay
Flow - Da_Killa_Kid one in the flow department because antonio's used multies that took away from some of the flow
Multi - Antonio Banderas clearly had better multies
Structure - Structure is tied (Both people laid down good structure)
Creativity - Creavity was hard to determine...I thought that this was a TIE also

I vote Antonio Banderas in this battle. Both MCs came pretty nice though
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