Thread: My Lyfe [part 2]
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Old 01-31-04, 10:19 AM   #2
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This was a nice drop...nice structure...good flow...good descriptions...I Felt this was better in some points then Part 1...because it grasped me a little more...your vocab was good...i liked the concept...very good work...keep it up
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