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Good collabo...I Liked everybodys verses..you all wrote a great picture and in great emotion...very well done
Deacon...You opened this collab up very nicely...the vocab and detail was excellent...very capturing for the reader
Mentill...You also wrote very well i've never read anything from you in PS but you did in awesome job...very creative and good detail as well...i enjoyed the read
Key low...The Crew battle against you is going tobe hard i see...lol....but none the less
you did a great job ending this callabo...very good imagery and detail...I enjoyed these lines from you's
Deacon-
Destruction is so easy when your swinging at broken tree limbs…
Only to react by falling down to a ceiling of broken feelings…
^^Very powerful line...enjoyed that
Mentill-
Kissin' the silhouette from a distance Destiny ... A cross
At wat cost ? To eradicate our sins With his own blood loss
^^^...that was just fuckin dope
Key Low-
Online…bandits take a Track or Two, slowly but surely Diminishing his Work/
His Visions Cling with Hurt…who knew his Gift would Bring a Curse?/
^^I Really enjoyed that line...great concept Good work
Great Callabo....Keep up the good work
Peace
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