I came into battling, first time ever
how tha fuck did u get that record? u musta never battled legends never
^played concept and bad structure, could have been worded better
ur 13 and ur bottom of ur class but think ur clever
i seen ur pic and u think ur a gangsta
^try at a personal, but didnt really hit... and didnt rhyme
no ur not ur straight from bel-air like all the rest of the wanksta
^dont like uneven shit, keep it in bars, set the punch up better
u think ur cool cause u gotta a crew
they only tryin 2 make u feel better cause nobody likes u
^weak punch for a closer. and again the structure needs work


true!d wasnt lyin, his wackness is a fact
youll be crushed by my tactical impact
^nice flow, but not really a good punch...
ill hit u so fast, youll be dead b4 u can react
dont even fuck wit ice, its bad for your heart
your flow should b illegal,like workers at WalMart
wit that wack ass talent, that you call art
^again nice flow... but ya aint really punching hard enough
your a newb, wit no stats or nothin displayed
a merkin in the makin, true d, gettin sprayed
^ok personal... this hit a bit harder
im unleashin pure rhymes, furiously raged
this guy wishes he was "wild", but hes still caged
^average punch.... dont hold up much for a closer tho

im giving this to Ice, he came at it harder, with a better structure... and connected more... tho not really hard..... vote=ice
.....return the favour.....