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Old 01-31-04, 10:43 AM   #18
lilrenegade89
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this is how u need to vote and give a reason y in each catagory
Flow - xxxxx, was structured better, which made it flow better

Punches - xxxxx, some were played by both cats, but i felt that xxxxx had more and the ones he did have hit alot harder

Personals - xxxxx, had alot more, and were alot better, yyyyy's were pretty lame and didn't form together to well.. suggestion xxxxx you shouldn't have to explain your personals

Multies - Obviously xxxxx, by his type of rhyme scheme, his rhyme scheme almost always guarantees him flow and multies. If your a newb take a close look and you'll see.

Vocab - Both were lacking on this, and need to elevate

Originality - Even, some of lines by both of you were played, but overall alright verses
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