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Old 01-31-04, 12:27 PM   #14
The Jett
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punches- Pot
flo- Pot
structure- Pot
meti4's- Pot
multi's- Pot

Overall- Pot
Honestly, Hardhitter need's to level off his structure
And focus on punches, wit out sayin Kidd so much
Both also need to Kill the //'s too
Potent shorten ur lines to maybe 3/4's of current
And use more original punches and Meti4's
You had enuff here, But you won't in the future

Hope this helped u guys
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