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Old 01-31-04, 01:00 PM   #16
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Flow - Dev...
Multi- White...The only thing you did actually come nice in.
Punches - Dev
Wordplay- Dev
Vocab-Dev
Structure- Dev
Verse- Dev


Alright, good battle from both. Dev, your verse was good although you did a lil bit of feeding. Its ok though, you only did it in one line. Nice punches, you kept them short and simple....You use nice vocab. Good verse from you.

White.....you went wrong in alot of places, your lines were stretched, and you don't get to the point. The D.E.V. line was a nice attempt at a personal but it didn't work. Don't talk about dick so much, makes look gay. Ok....Your verse was iight, just work on those lines, and don't use such played lines...nice verse

good battle to both

Vote - Dev
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