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IP:
I'm a mercenary armed with the spoken word
your confidence against me is simply absurd.
And since a mercenary i be actin like
I gots to get paid to rock the mic.
whatever you shoot will be infantile
all efforts against me are merely futile
cuz i rep from the village where we got it rough
so pussy rhymes you bring won't be enough.
it's my first time on the site and i smell your fear
but you been on here for a coupla years.
my rhymes make blood drip out of your ears
and soon you gonna be drownin in tears
you should try to fight, you ought to
I'm the stranger mom said not to talk to
I'll chop you up with a sense of art
and the police won't be able to find the parts.
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ok this was ok and had decent attempt but 5/10
need to elavate a lil some,direct yer punches more
and be more creative overall nice try but not enough
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Dixie nicer around the burners than Chef Emeril Laggase
You couldnt kick good shit if you was deep in manure doin' karate
I come with the best lyrics and all types of hell tricks
And I'll straight Peirce your back like # 34 for the Celtics
This kid's gay,after I eat him alive I get cavities like hersey
People look and ask who he is like a personalized jersey
When I read your verse, Dirty, I wasnt in a least way shook
And I always come first like the T & F part in the Eastbay Book
I'm really taking it easy on this guy thats tryin to be tough
But to be truthful..he lyrics is all ass like B.E.T. uncut
Im ownin this newbie and really leavin' him a big mess
Cause you're half real like Mitchell missin' Ness
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this was like a 7/10 and had better directed punches and personals
so thats why this kid won,overall nice battle verse keep it up
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vote/kryo...................
hit my link up in my sig cuz i took the time,peace
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