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Old 01-31-04, 01:12 PM   #21
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Punches: Kryo, his punches were more effective, harder-hitting
Wordplay: Neither of you had wordplay
Multis: Neither, you guys need to flip some multis, makes a better read
Opener: Kryo, the Emiril Lagasse line was a lot better than the mercanary line, it was a punch. Dirty, you always want to open up big.
Closer: Kryo, your second to last line was a setup, but you could've put a wordplay in somewhere. Again, Dirty's was lacking, no punches, not effective.

Vote - Kryogenix

Both need to work on multis, helps with delivery. Definitely need to see a punch from Dirty, if you want to win a battle, good vocabulary though.

Dixie nicer around the burners than Chef Emeril Laggase
Best line of this battle. By Kryo

I'll chop you up with a sense of art
and the police won't be able to find the parts
Best bar by Dirty, could be considered a punch, but didn't make much sense.

Hit up one of my battle with an honest vote, please.

PS, this is a 1000 characters vote, I hope it's good enough.
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