hey yo this is a madd gud peice!! its the kinda thing that alotta poets and writers think sometimes wen they dont hav faith in wat they do, i think that u have an xtremely strong point here and that u put alotta thought in2 it. gud peice overall

.........favorite part...........

it's like no matter what i do, or what i write
people point out the wrong, never the right
i'm being looked upon as just a nobody
i wonder why my wrist's are bloody

^^this is such a gud stanza, bcuz its so tru

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