Iceman takes this with ease..

More creative and original punches.. better structure and flow.. much better vocab.. basically every catergory there is to take.. wasn't the best verse ever but it was more than enough here...
True D.. try and think up some witty bars.. instead of the played shit.. be more original...
Also the structure was slightly off at times... try to keep all the lines the same length to help the verse flow overall..
An attempt at a personal which was good.. but the verse was lackin in comparison..
Overall.. one sided

Vote - Iceman..

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