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Old 01-31-04, 02:43 PM   #9
n'zyme
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Battling tha Illusionist is one thing, but to beat me, u must be dreamin/
Your moms mouths like an ocean it contains so much seamen/
weak opener..kinda played
Learn from Pac's mistakes before ya gettin' smoked/
I wanted to get my dick wet but your moms left it soaked/
decent flow but sex personals and shit are played
you scared, you don't like this raw hip hop sound/
you like men, but still you suck from the waist down/
better....this line was okay..too much filler though
i had a look at your mommas pussy, all i saw was hair/
Then i saw a big forest fire, and smokey the bear/
nope...more sex talk
You saw some little guys, its sick that you malested 'em/
Your rhymes are so weak that your notepad rejected 'em/
1st line wack...2nd line was pretty good
Have you got a girlfirend? 'cause i don't intend to be mean/
But you spend half of your life infront of a computer screen/
2nd line was okay....a lot of filler....
You seem to scared man my rhymes are just too damn sick/
Only way you could Beat Me Down is if i was your dick/
okay closer.....overall verse was a little on the weak side, nice flow and structure but hardly any real punches or personals....


Kid must be catapaultin cows cause his punches just graze me...
U could be security on star trek and still never phase me....
good opener....nice punches had me laughin
Kids trying to spit sick...just pays homage to the greatest....
Cause he throws up Big L's at every engagment...
another decent punch....
Kids got his gas mask on for a reason his rhymes are pollutin..
inhale all the canibus you want kid can't remix that illusion...
nice play off of his name........
xtreme lyrical gangstaz didn't know they still exist.....
only place saw there names were on other Mc's merked list...
not bad...could've been worded better but still effective personal
you shoulda listened to the saying if the shoes fits wear it..(avy)
look up^ kid admitted defeat......i didn't have to spit...
okay..too much filler..................
can't script well cause you drop your pens like horny men..
sad Kid thought he was gonna win..jus illusions again.....
okay closer.....your verse was a little weak around the end but the opener and most of the verse were good.....creative punces and personals.....

overall:Underrated