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Old 01-31-04, 02:48 PM   #20
Kautious
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ok battle...

k- this was almost even, k you had some ok personals and yea punches was on key
basicly why i think i like d your verse was because i didn't half to read it more then once like some, your vocab was nice to.

bombz- your verse was nice, you had a better rhyme structure and the wordplay was aight but you lacked on the delivery in punches and had few personals. good verse though.

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