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Old 01-31-04, 02:48 PM   #3
Holmes Jr.
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Topic too played, too short, vocab was pretty good at times but not consistent if you gave this some proofreadin, extended it, etc. it could be way better. And I am a druggie, but that's not biasing my critique. 5/10
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