My rhymes get you shunned from forum like you got lepracy
your can't elevate against me in a battle, you just stand next to me
decent opener....okay punch
Cause my techniques a rush just like adrenaline, flowing threw menolin
I'll draw my blood from your veins and then re-inject it again
first line good...second okay, flow was a little off
Whatever rhymes you have i don't care, cause beatins you's a must
Just like sex you last ten seconds on this mic and then you bust
not bad, kinda played but decent wording
If you winn then its luck , cause in this game your just a rookie
this kid is still a virgin , i thought he did it all for the nookie?
nope...not feelin this.....
Go ahead and test your skills spit one rhyme or spit two
Who even needs a voter, we both know undoubtibly i'm better then you
weak closer...............


im like verbal steel, the way im coming this hard,
you shit is weak, more suited for greeting cards,
2nd line was good.
another newb to RB, i should stay away shits spreading,
like your punches, you'll be a misses at ur wedding,
this was not bad....could've been worded differently though
i was bored, so i decided to waste my time with this cat,
im serving this cat, like he's dinner on a place mat*
punch was decent, flow was off a little bit....
the prodgical child is here, thinks he jesus or something,
he couldn't reach my level, if he spat his lyrics whilst jumping,
better......
your name give me punches equivelnt to a building frame,
i give other rappers new personals....
so i archiatected the complex world of personals an pain,
good closer........


overall both verses were decent but Menolin had more creative punches, they weren't as played out...decent drops by both though, a little weak with the personals but good battle nonetheless...

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