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Old 01-31-04, 02:54 PM   #12
Holmes Jr.
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NICE. Yor vocab was very nice but that wasnt even the half of it. Nice wordplay nice multis etc. The imagery was awesome you really got into this kids mind and got an idea bout his life fucked up and whatnot..I thought this was gonna be a really played piece you know hardass kills his mom blah, then you switched it up made this very original...keep droppin 8/10
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