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Old 01-31-04, 03:10 PM   #20
menolin
\/ pissing me off!!!!
 
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N'zyme murdered this cat,
every line was nice, better personals, defo harder hitting punches,
he had a structure, his wordplay was nice, an it was a good battle verse!!

killa conceptz, that was absoulute shit realy,
fix ya struture, make your punches hit him, hit with some personal,
you had no wordplay really, your cretivity an ability to make punches obviously dont match!!
jus elevate!!

peace
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