carsonjextX2
a nice compact verse which contained everything really,
nice punches,
wordplay,
personals,
second line didn't make sense, but your closer killed it


telekentikz
your struture was good, but the stretched lines let it down!!
some aiight punches, an some were played, but overall you dropped pretty weak, an didn't get near carson overall

my vote carsonjetX2


plz drop an honest vote on this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111143