yo yo yo
not really any punches that hit hard, you had one or two decent concepts, but didn't make enough of them.
your struture was basically fucked, wordplay was pretty weak in place,
an a personal or two would go a long way.
harlems finest
you had some nice personals which basically killed the battle off, you had decent punches as well, wordplay was good, format an structure was nice.
harlems finest takes this for a better verse, with punches!!
plz drop an honest vote on this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111143