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Old 01-31-04, 03:26 PM   #16
menolin
\/ pissing me off!!!!
 
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malice
verse laced comlexity, it was too simple really,

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I take pecks at ya, but no big chunks
at least not till tha end when you recieve my final punch


what the fuck^ you need to hit with your punches an hit with personals,
not much wordplay, seems like you need to elevate.


n zyme
no need for an explanation really, most people can see you took this,
harder punches, better wordplay, nice vocab, good format,
everything needed to win a battle!!
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