Tech wants a fast battle Russian me but he'll catch the bullet....
battlin me is like this game ^but you the only one pullin it...
you started off kind of weak.. Over all your opening wasnt all that hard. wordplay here was kind of basic and i thought you really lacked a directed punch
how that gonna end..Tech couldn't key a fuckin Car...
kid got a ghostwriter so he defines buyin out the bar...
alright bar here.. set up was a nice punch, but the follow through seems like a played subject
taking out this kids parts like the game operation...
Technician fucks up scripts if he does a collaberation...
the follow through punch sort of fell weak to me, it needed a little more strength in the bar.
what you get when you a charasmatic penpal hopefully bail..
for fucks sake stop sendin me your raps from jail...
nice concept here, good connection through your lines, although it sort of lacked punchs and a decent metaphor but the joke was alright
There bad i would never use em like a one night stand...
need a vacation now cause 4 10 mins i came better than you planned
the ending was alright.. Sort of missing a a hard punch though. the metaphor in the set was ok

Over all your verse was lacking on directed punchs. Not to mention the strength of them wasnt all that great either. You could have improved your follow alot, and also tryed working in some more multis.




It's no fuckin secret ........ nobody can feel your flow
Verse not worth peepin ... maybe thats why "they still dont know"
nice opening, straight punchs, good personal
We battled before ...... I came away clean without a scratch ....
In fact it 5 to no more ..... and you actually accepted a rematch?
good good, working the personals i like that. Your punch isnt the hardest, but its in there
It hadda be 10 minutes cuz i thought this kid might run
.............Not even a real mc and his avy says Mic Club
alright bar, althought your set could have come off better, the follow through was an alright shot
Hardly underated ........ that name .....no wonder he made it
Hit me with all your petty punchlines .....?please.... save it
i thought this bar could have used more in the follow through. the personal was an alright shot i guess
Lines 9 and ten is where you meet your end my friend
Cuz you cant beat me .................not even if you pretend
the ending was alright.. the follow through i liked, although could have worked it better

Over all you had a decent verse, nice personals, along with some punchs that kept hitting throughout the verse. Your flow was pretty much on and your metaphors were decent.

Vote- Technician
He just came with harder punchs and much more personals.

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