lmao... this is all newbs

well this is my brake down

flow n structure:_ i think that breth took this becasue he had an ok structure and the flow was aight. peurto you need to fix your structure and your verse i wasn't feeling at all

punches n personals- Brethren took this by far with the personals on perto and the punches he threw in thier, peurto you need to aim more at brethren.

overall- brethren- took this with a far better verse, both elevate

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