listen.. oh shit.. michael jackson is doin the moonwalk..lol.. no hate.. but this sounds like something michael jackson can dance too..lol.. but the quality is nice.. the piano line is too simple, n the synths dont sound good.. its very hard to spit on this... but once reason is 2nd nature to u.. im pretty sure ur beats will be better..
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