Aight... here it is
Metaphors, Vocab, Flow (even though it wasn't that hot), and everything go to Mysterioso....
He came out punchin'... and it wasn't half bad either. HE still need to elevate
Chao... you need to keep writin'... your style is wack dogg. Check out the Wackness Emergency Center. If you keep writin' you'll get better. That's how I did it, thats how everyone else did it, and how you CAN do it.
Vote-Mysterioso... Good punches & Metaphors, plus Vocab... work on your structure though.

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