that was leaning a little more on the poetic side but it was still very creative...i enjoyed the topic very much and i especially like how you interjected each verse with questions....helped add to the overall feeling of the piece...and i like how you ended it as well...all around nice drop here, to be expected but you definitely met or surpassed quality standards with this shit...nice drop..

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