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Old 01-31-04, 04:43 PM   #13
Dragon I
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in my opinion, jae guttah tried a little to hard to use long words, and although it could have been immpressive, it made u look like you were trying to hard. not enough punch lines and too much complexity to make it flow well. thign's was better i'm afraid. better punches, nicer flow and it was a little more personal. jae guttah i think could have done better, but dind't, so it's going to thing this time.

can neboody that reads this vote on my battle in my link? it's getting seriously slept on.....
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