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Old 01-31-04, 05:01 PM   #14
LyRiCaL GeEnUs
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90- You came pretty weak, your punches were kinda played and unoriginal. Your structure was awfule, and that threw your flow off. Nothing really great about your verse. Nothin really stood out. Try and be creative with your punches, personals, and metas. Check out the whackness emergency center for good battle tips. It'll come with time

MM- You came alright, you had a nice opener. Your verse was kinda basic... but You took the punches and personals catergorie, cause you had more, and they were also better: more creative and original. I like the flow of ya verse too. Overall you took this for a harder verse.

PLease take the time to drop an honest vote here guys. I took the time fo you. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110722