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Old 01-31-04, 05:17 PM   #14
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Tech wants a fast battle Russian me but he'll catch the bullet....
battlin me is like this game ^but you the only one pullin it...
how that gonna end..Tech couldn't key a fuckin Car...
kid got a ghostwriter so he defines buyin out the bar...
taking out this kids parts like the game operation...
Technician fucks up scripts if he does a collaberation...
what you get when you a charasmatic penpal hopefully bail..
for fucks sake stop sendin me your raps from jail...
There bad i would never use em like a one night stand...
need a vacation now cause 4 10 mins i came better than you planned...
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aight this was pretty clean but punches didnt connect well wit ya werdplay
cuz you have to make sure ya punches concides with his person and character
overall 7/10 and this was an ok battle verse,keep it up

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this was way to simple but it was enough,punches connected well
and also personals connected well too,overall 8/10,keep elavating

vote/Tech...............................
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