lyric
lyric took this one he had everything better really,
better, harder hitting punches, better wordplay, he had more complexity
better vocab, nice format!!
all this makes a more suitable battle verse!!
reece killah
your verse was just too simple, not many hard hitting punches, a lot of shitty vocab,
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You put together nice sentences to spit within the battle
I put together death sentences, and eat you like a cannible
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you said sentances twice in the bar, you shouldn't reall do that in a verse, unless its a name,
you just need to elevate!!
peace