hmm Wiz= You had some whack ass structure and that fucked your flow up majorly. You came with played and unoriginal lines and a lot of filler. Check out the Whackness Emergency Center for good battle tips. Stay away from gay/sex shit too, cause its mad played
Thing- You came alright, not greatpunches, but better and harder than your opponent. Your flow was good cept that 3 lines rhyme scheme at the beginning kida was weak. But over all a good verse.
PLease drop an honest vote here guys. i took the time for you.
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