Art Official..your structure made it a struggle to read ur verse..
& when i finally got into it..i was running for the exit.
..Not that bad though especially for a FL piece but..
Sometimes the creativity was of such a low level.. work on it.
menolin came wack as ever.. But better then Art Official.
..Guess his experience keeps giving him the upper hand..
But thats..obvious..when battlin newbs.
..Some ok..punches .. witty.
So for a overall battle verse..
Especially better punches.. & structure.
vote menolin