this time ill hit your ass hard enough to let you out from rb
this should be the last thread you are about to see,
not feeling your opener. kind of lacking punchs i thought
being a prodigious bitch wanting to be hard slapped
its not a good thing cuz ill have my thugs having u kidnapped
not much in the way of punchs.. net threats arent somthing i would shoot for
you rookie think you can use always the same rhymes?
in all your battles, like them overplayed will be as good as mines?
weak punchs i thought
its useless for you trying to understand cuz your only a little child
but only dropping shit in a rap forum wont have your ass mild
concept needed more in the follow through i thought. lacking in a punch through out the bar.
you must be a fucking prodigious if you can just do this with that style:
get used to having some 0-X record taped in your file!
Not feeling this ending, sort of fell off i thought, needed a little more with a directed punch.

Over all your verse seemed basic, you didnt have much in the way of punchs, and you could have used more strength alogn with saome personals. Your flow wasnt that bad i guess but you needed a better rhyme scheme.


IP: 399E F0FD


You talking about my style, you think ur the real Savior
No ones understands you , your rap don't have flavor
eh not much in the way of an opening
You wanna battle, then why's your face turning pewter
This kids so ghetto he had to type his rap from my computer
i dunno why but the follow through kind works, lol i like the flip concept
My rhymes don't over lap , they just turn you cross-eyed
You take a single look and turn so dizzy you think ur high
your flow went off here but the bar itself wasnt bad, i was feeling it.strength could use a little but good ish
with this i tell you bye, I turn you scared and make you leave
Your sad cause the only word you can spell for your name is mc
not much in strength, the metaphro could have been better
I make it hard to breathe....your not talking son your just typin
you don't know what to say in your rhymes, so you just put a hyphen
good follow through punch, set up was alright. concept wasnt bad
I stick in a knife, just to make sure that u are cooked enough
It took ur ass half an hour to write a rhyme that really sucked
alright follow through. the connect and direction could have been some what better here
I don't get buck , or mad, I just get revenge......
next time use a spell check right before you press send
started falling off here, with the strength of your punch and your metaphor
So sad you've reached the end, you can't rap cause your a homo
Even your friends of all dissed you , you've made like Han and gone solo
the first part of the follow through could have used some rewording and a quick change of concept i thought

Over all an alright verse, you have ok punchs and good metaphors for the most part. your rhyme scheme wasnt much, and needed some multis, other than that your verse wasnt bad.

Vote- ChildProdigy
Came out with better punchs and metaphors. Took it with the consistency of everything.

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