OK peice...flow got weak as the verse went on...
but good in spots...sounded more like an audio than a text...
up your vocab, multis, metas, and wordplay...and work on your flow...
but you did have a few hot lines...my favorite...

"yall cats is soft like charmin tissue
no triccs up my sleeve just my arm and a pistol"

anyway...keep flowin and elevate...