official, you came strong for a newb, but your structure threw me off in da deep end and was whack too!!!!!!! looking at your verse...your punchlines were somewhat good but not any Canibus or shit though. Menolin kept up da tight flow and structure even some of your punches weren't hitting dawg.... pretty creative and unique and had a better personals . Menolin get my vote for having harder punches and personals dat even dis newb Art Official couldn't stop if he tried. I enjoyed dis battle from both sides job well done keep on elevating and work on structure and punches Official.
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vote for my battle below thanks man..................
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