Jesus.. This was if I may say.. Horrible..

You make "Fuckas fold like futons".. Wow. That isn't played..

You concept.. Is done everyday by almost everyone.. Nothing original here.. I mean there are only so many combinations of words that can explain how "gully" and "thugged-out" you are.. I've seen 99% of them.. Write on an interesting topic, providing that you can think of one. What are your views on politics/life/religion etc etc.. Presuming you have some, you should voice them via your open mics. It's a good way to get your message out there without getting off your ass..

Peep some of the "veteran" open mic members, I admit no-one (including myself) is very skilled and talented at writing open mics.. But you can get a general idea on the structure/scheme/content/vocab etc that you should be striving for.

For now work on correct spelling and structure.. It gets annoying reading "fukaz" and "str8" and other stupid net-slang like that day in day out.

Elevate. pz.

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