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Originally Posted by da-one
im the best of the best and the first of the first 
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^Your wacker than wack.. Matter of fact.. You wacker than that!
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Originally Posted by da-one
even if they had 20/20 with urkel glasses they still wouldn't see me
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^If you had 20/20 vision glasses would actually impair your vision. Try putting on someones glasses that you know, it won't help your eyes at all. Just to let you know.
Seriously, learn how to spell. Type it up in microsoft word and use spellcheck. It isn't that hard. Also, punchlines really have no place in Open Mic unless they are witty and actually add some value to the piece. They
DO NOT add value if they are played as fuck. (See below)
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Originally Posted by da-one
i keep niggas in checc like nike's
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^Please, that is horrible. It may have been nice the first 20 times I heard it.
Find an actual topic to write on.. This "gankstuh gully all about my nine millimetre chrome glock" shit gets annoying. Find something you're passionate and write about it.
Lose the smileys as well.. Open Mic is about the topic, not how many smileys you can incorporate into your piece.
Elevate.
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