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Old 01-31-04, 08:16 PM   #6
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Dev got this...

Jimmywhite came ok
But his punches were not that great
Flow was decent, wordplay could be used
Personals were weak...
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i mean whats DEV? {D}ick {E}nlargement {V}acation?

I swear thats bittin, but i dont kno from where
Overall verse was ok.. 10-20

Dev came straight
Punches were decent
Wordplay was ok...
Flow was pretty good
Personals were lacked
Structure was nice...
Overall.. good verse... 13/20

Vote-Dev
Came a bit harder with punches
Structure was better too..
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