^ of course it's not studio quality...most net tracks aren't, especially if it's his first time...

ok it's called "pistol diss"...who's pistol? you say Yo alot...lol...you need more emotion in ur verse..it sound like ur just readin...you need overdubs too, ask someone about that if u don't know what an Overdub is..it'll make it sound a lot better...ur quality is pretty bad too....ur flow is iight tho...u got a lot to work on tho...

6.0 out of 10..

peace

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