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Old 01-31-04, 10:38 PM   #14
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Carson...ur verse flowed nicely...but some of the rhymes were really weak..but then again u prolly didn't spend much time on it...

Fair In Height...all you needed was like..2 good punches in that verse and a better structure and you would have it dude....ur rhymes are good, n ur vocab is decent..but you just gotta fix some of ur shit...ur structure is horrible too..

vote- Carson Jet

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...t=107780&page=2

^ battle with Village Pimp..needs votes..
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