ok im not going to hate cauz I use to make beats like these 2 years ago. but you got cliping problems and your tracks are not full at all there is tons of room for more instrments for melodys that is a big problem of yours not realy any melodys. Peep my shit
www.soundclick.com/odpbeats the top 2 I just made... see what ya think Holla at me if you need help peace