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Old 02-01-04, 04:34 AM   #12
D.liver.E
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outcome
Wow, your holding three wins, and you think thats a thumbs up
you already lost once, this chumps just a seventeen year old fuck/
pretty weak for opener 4/10
Voice of the streets?? man your own block doesnt wanna hear you
ima play an anti-villin, an destroy this wack rap super-hero/
ok I guezz 5/10
His talents like ray charles, theres none seen with Eyi- sytez
poor excuse with battle rhymes, you remind me of bum fights/
ok punch 6/10
Ill cut your "eye site" in half maken you see a new vision
its simple addition, you plus rap equals wack, dont you listen/
personal 6/10
I couldnt agree more, after this battle it will destroy your image
Its not sunday so why is your wackness helping my talent scrimage/
4/10
your starten beef to raw for you to chew, are you high flyweight
this herbs ready to shake, its like harlems haven an earthquake/
decent closer 6/10
total: 31/50

eyi
I’m Probably Ya Most Comp, But What Made You Wanna Knock Wit Me?/
I’ll Just Punch You Constantly, “No Combinations Needed” Like “Locker Keys”/
nice opener 7/10
Out’s Been Beatin The Hell Outta Newbies, But I’ll Have To Stop Ya Win-Rows/
When He Just “Shows Up and Agitates Ya Screen” Like “Pop Up Win-dows”/
nice metaphor 8/10
Noboby Wants To Read Ya Shit, I Hate To Be The News Breaker/
OutCome Wouldn’t Have “Personals” If He Took Em Out Of “Newspapers”/
funny shit 7/10
You Aint Blazin Wit Me, Endin Ya Career In This Face To Face Till You See/
That Ya Chances Of Winnin “Hands” Down Are That Of An “Arabian Thief”/
ok 6/10
Someone Must’ve Told You That You Were Dope, But You’ve Been Led Wrong/
Hell, Outcome’s Verses Are The True Reason His Frontlines Get Slept On/
ok punch 7/10
This Battle’s "Wopsided"……………But Please Don’t Blame ME/
Ever Seen "Shaq and GP See-Sawin"….."Poll Votes Resemble The Same Thing"/(Get It)
decent finisher 7/10
total: 42/50

Outcome had a pretty nice verse there but eyi's punchez were just a lot harder and funnier... He also had the better metaphors...
vote - eyi

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