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Old 02-01-04, 05:24 AM   #18
VanIllabymidnite
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Okay here's how I saw this.

Flow=Dragon, his flow was there and much easier to read, Fatal you need to work on not stretching out your lines so much.

Punches=Fatal, he had more punches and they hit a bit harder. Dragon, this is an area that you should work on, you had some punches they just didn't hit that strong.

Personals=Tie, seemed like neither of you really had many real personals. Something you both could work on, it would improve your battles a lot.

Vocab=Tie, you both need to use some more vocab. It would really help you, it opens up whole new avenues, and choices.

Over all=Dragon, I think that you kind of messed yourself up by putting in some stuff that didn't hit to hard and you stayed on that line for to long waiting until the end to really start hitting. Fatal, you need to work on your flow, I think that was your biggest problem, you had a decent amount of punches, and attempted more personals which is good.

Vote=Fatal

Please hit this up with an honest vote.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108625
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