Thanx for they feedback, if you have anything else to say go ahead....
Lingua Franca 3
Nothing is promised, but everything is offered.
Dreams are bright and vivid,
what I want is what I have to accomplish.
But what I want doesn't have to come promised.
It's a gift if I happen to come across it,
and can be taken a any given time.
Life can't bbe taken for granted,
you're granted life to take advantage.
People are dying trying to live, take it got damn it.
I pray for forgiveness for my sins and embrace my salvation.
If I were to live this again, I'd live it with positive prespective and treat it precious.
Nothing in this world is more sacred than humanlife and intelligence.
The Two precious gifts,
can not be duplicated or created.
Everything in this world could turn in to paper weight,
in a NY minute, value drops faster than the DOW.
If that would any of us be satisfied with how we managed our time
and how we treated people close to us and innocent strangers.
Or would we realize we're mad at the wrong people for the wrong reasons.
Did you mean like that?
"Shawty "B"
You can see the other posts I have done, if you'd like.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110858
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111490
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...d.php?p=1150366
James Jr.