Skiddz man, u elevated since the last time i read your things, very nice, Creative & a good immagery .. your vocab was like word o.O on the points were needed adn the flow was good.. the story telling in here was dope..

Com, for a first time open mic, u did well, i like ur story telling aswell, good vocab, & flow was good aswell.. lol..nice concept used ..u guys collabed very well, .. hope to see more from u com .. props to both ..

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