yo ite damn jace nice soit dawg....
...tryout for instant...........
your shit was on track nice sense of flow,
with witty consistent punches...only thin to work on wud be structure.
...try and use lines that are as long as eachpotha...not like this,
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get it...nice verse tho man tryout,
da killa...not bad but punches wernt to good they were funny,
just not hard disses...work on your structure cam abit strewched also abit played man,

nice battle v-jacent

plz hit this now http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110695 thx alot...........pz