ite this wasnt nethin special..i guess,
your both new here....potent your verse was ok..
nice attempt..punches were ok but get some wordplay in there,
also try and through some personals in man..not to bad tho
your structure was coo but take the"/"'s of the end its newbish man,
r-m-not to good your shit was streched like mad,
improve your structure peep sme gd battles in elavated,
work on punches also and flow lacked,
v-potent,

plz hit this now http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109550 thx..............pz