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Old 02-01-04, 01:19 PM   #10
Brethren
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Punches: K, the I ain't talking about a puncher was a decent line, sdizzle didn't have any punches, made his verse pretty weak
Wordplay: Sdizzle, the contra-dict line was actually a good wordplay, but there was no other wordplay
Multis: Neither, neither of you flipped multis, flip some, adds complexity
Personals: K, the stop braggin off snoop was the best personal
Opener: Sdizzle, The contra-dict line was nice, K quit using those gay jokes
Closer: K, Ended with a personal, Sdizzles ending, and most of his verse didn't even rhyme

Vote - K

Overall more polished verse, Sdizzle, you need to actually rhyme to rap, that's probably the biggest element. Also throw in some creative punches, both of you.

listen bitch bars of soap in jail..be the only thing your dropping,
Best line of the battle, by K

gets games and is penis confused, they contra~dict
Best line, by Sdizzle

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