Potent takes this, it's clear you're new though man, try taking off the // for starters and also clean up the structure or bit. You have it where it counts though, witty punches and good flow took this battle for Potent. Try to throw personals more often because if you don't you might as well be battling anybody instead of your opponent, personals hit hard. Keep elevating, good luck. Other cat, same thing goes for you but you *really* need to fix your structure and lose the //, also try to think of more original punches.

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