T-West

Biting names off of Big L, just so that he have a greater appeal
He's Harlems Finest...But isn't homer simpson from springfield
..Ok..the concept has been done, not a good opener
Your such an example, mothers of America must really love you
they can say to their kids...
This is what drugs can do to you!
..Alright..personal..not bad..though a little played
sounds like he melts gun barrels, no wonder ur like a candle
Because you've lost this match...as quick as u thought of ur handle
For some reason i liked this.. nice
Now I know why harlem is filled with poverty and violence
They must have nothing...if this punk is der finest
He's still from Wales, regardless his handle..so it doesnt work..
And ya name, oh man, it's just so gangsta too...
it's Welsh...
No wonder i've left ya verse dark n purple like grape juice
Muah ok. not a real good closer either.

[B]Harlem's Finest
I peeped ya last battle with Proof son.. I'm ashamed I even read it
Wanted me to set the battle up.. still.. its not often herbs earn credit
Shows effort of research..ok lines..
Tried signing up to LLL.. basically you've gotta elevate to get that far
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Face facts.. This is the only way West could ever raise the bar..
Slightly funny, somewhat creative
Fool couldn't beat a drum, I'm surprised you even took the chance
Obviously can't take the strain... even his AIM handle is pissypants!
Witty..& comical.. nice personal
Derives from a family of achievers, the herb himself was exstatic
Mom's debut... double page spread........ National Geographic!
Mom lines are a No-No.. but the twist in the second line was funny
His whole profiles one big punchline.. I mean seriously.. why accept?
Kid purchased 'Rap for Dummies'.. seems he's still readin the second step
Ha..got a giggle..ok closer

Overall: T-West wasnt bad..the structure & flow where on point..
Had some ok punches & attempts at personals..But i think that pic bar,
Didnt really work well, i mean i clicked it & he didnt look weird or like a druggie to me..
..So that kind of took away the essence..
& i pretty much agree with West's last line..
Harlem's Finest came better i feel..Had a ok closer & it only got better from there..
Creative..witty & overall funny punches..
Just better, & much more personal..Flow & structure where on point too.
So for a overall battle verse & especially punches..
vote Harlem's Finest